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Опять всё та же проблема – ненатуральные перегруженные диалоги. «Как тогда вообще сюда изначально» – это даже прочитать сложно) Сюжет не блещет, но сам рассказ в целом норм, с поправкой на особенности жанра. В конце почему-то было смешно)
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