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Написано прикольно, читается легко, но концовку нужно переписать… Растеряны все ниточки связывающие с началом. Нет возврата к создателю… Нет понимания куда делись герои? Что дальше? Пока это незаконченное повествование…))
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Светлана Визгалина
Начало очень интригующее.Оконцовка все испортила....Но почитать можно.Прикольный слэнг)))Хотелось бы продолжения.........
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